Re: Discussion Thread

EATSEGA Sat May 14, 2011 11:51 am

bollocks...i can't do anything now...TROY YOU PULLED ME INTO A DEAD END!!!

no1s perfect Sat May 14, 2011 12:11 pm

you could fight me if you want??

no1s perfect Sat May 14, 2011 1:15 pm

hello troy is the wanderer still waiting in a corner waiting for me lolz

no1s perfect Sat May 14, 2011 1:42 pm

david fight me

**volvalgia** Sat May 14, 2011 2:10 pm

Logan - for now, use this posting template:

1:Person does something.
2:PersonTalks
3:Person leads on to next post.

Try not to overuse words, use a thesaurus. For example, in your introductory post you used "seemed like an eternity" twice. Also, check your posts thoroughly before clicking send. Don't rush.

no1s perfect Sat May 14, 2011 2:11 pm

got it

**volvalgia** Sat May 14, 2011 2:18 pm

Good, good... Getting better.

You don't have to follow it all the time, though, it just unclutters things a bit. Watch the sentence breaks:

no1s perfect wrote:Bane spun round to see a stranger how did someone know my name I have never seen this person before

"how do you know my name stranger"

as he spoke he began to prepare for a fight hand on blade he waited for an answer

That was your original post.

Now if I were you, I would write it like this:
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Bane spun round to see a stranger. How did someone know my name? I have never seen this person before...

"How do you know my name ,stranger?"

As he spoke he began to prepare for a fight. Hand on blade, he waited for an answer.
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See what a difference punctuation makes? When it sounds like there will be a pause in speech, put a comma there.

**volvalgia** Sat May 14, 2011 2:21 pm

Italicize your thoughts, or place them in single quotes. It makes life easier. Watch capitals. You're not a bad writer. If you watch out for punctuation, you will look much better. Stalked, not staked.

Good so far.

no1s perfect Sat May 14, 2011 2:23 pm

okay I dont know how to use commas you can tell me later at school ill try to use more fullstops and capitals thought and anything else I can think of starting after this post (lolololzzzzz)

**volvalgia** Sat May 14, 2011 2:26 pm

How strong are the skeleton lords? What do they look like?

By the way, Deimos means terror/fear in Greek, and Polemistis, his last name, is Warrior....

So Deimos Polemistis, the Captain, has a name which means "Warrior of Terror."

How awesome is that?

no1s perfect Sat May 14, 2011 2:33 pm

Thats quite cool. They look like a skeleton you would find in a lab but come with flaming swords and low-medium brain power btw came first in black ops 58 kills 2 deaths and person who came second had 12 kills 24 deaths

no1s perfect Sat May 14, 2011 2:36 pm

Do i control guard captain or you??????

**volvalgia** Sat May 14, 2011 2:39 pm

I do.

no1s perfect Sat May 14, 2011 2:45 pm

thanks i was going to make him weak Sad

no1s perfect Sat May 14, 2011 3:04 pm

gtg see you guys tommory

EATSEGA Sun May 15, 2011 1:22 am

I THOUGHT I SAID THAT I WAS GOING TO BE AFK AND THE TROY YOU DO SOMETHING STUPID TO ME. btw I killed the stupid guard by freezing his blood trolololololololol. I WILL BE AFK FOR 2 WEEKS DUE TO EXAMS AND THERE BETTER NOT BE ANOTHER STUPID GUARD OKAY???!?!?!

no1s perfect Sun May 15, 2011 2:11 am

hey david i think troys going to delete your post because he controls the guard not you and if you didn't notice i was in the middle of owning him (more like a tie but oh welll) and

we have exams!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( world explode )

EATSEGA Sun May 15, 2011 4:08 am

The guard dude is EVERYWHERE I TELL YOU!

**WaffleCopter** Sun May 15, 2011 6:27 am

David. What you have read in RP page 3 is all that you can use so far in your files.

**volvalgia** Sun May 15, 2011 12:01 pm

Ok Guys....

Just to clarify a few things.....

Please ask me if you're not sure about anything, or want to implement something new. I've had to add a Druid to the plot already, and the Captain of the Watch was supposed to be alone. Anyway, I have implemented both things already. but if I haven't stated something explicitly, don't assume. Ask me and I will be perfectly willing to implement it in the official gameplay.

Right now, my plot is unraveling, due to one person going in the opposite direction.

Sigh.....

**volvalgia** Sun May 15, 2011 12:02 pm

And David... It's why I asked Logan to interfere.

EATSEGA Sun May 15, 2011 1:10 pm

Okay troy

lemme control the captain for 1 post PLZPLZPLZPLZPZLPLZPLZPLZ

btw he's not gonna die xD

btw avalanche has a new skill FROST ARMOR (allies get surrounded by a blue aura which freezes all projectiles)

**volvalgia** Sun May 15, 2011 1:27 pm

No. He is an important NPC and will return later on.

no1s perfect Sun May 15, 2011 1:28 pm

yah when you said let me control him i thought he was going to use some retarded move that will kill me LLLOLOLOLLLLLLOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOO (lol)

EATSEGA Sun May 15, 2011 1:31 pm

volvalgia wrote:No. He is an important NPC and will return later on.

sorry already did it

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